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December 9, 2012
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Okay. Page One attempt. I still don't know if I should keep going.

I would really REALLY appreciate comments on this one. I would like to know if others think this is a project worth pursuing or not.

Remember, no flames or comments about "how much this sucks" or anything like that.

Thank you :)

EDIT:

I had a typo pointed out to me. While I'm happy to fix them, let's not nitpick on this. Especially if it's just one or two words that I accidentally mess up. Right now I just want to know if the drawings in each panel are good enough to keep readers engaged or if the flaws are too distracting. Thank you.
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~CaptainBrower Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think this looks really really great and you should definitely keep working on it. Perspective could use some work but overall this is a wonderful start and I'm interested to see the finished product.
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*VorpalRaven Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah...perspective has always been the bane of my drawings. Very discouraging at times. I don't know why, but...I guess I just can't see it right in my mind's eye. The latest two pages that I've yet to start editing don't look so good either...

Oh well. Guess all I can really say is bear with me, folks.

In the meantime, thank you for your encouragement.
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~Lily-Lyn-Rain Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So far though... I think I like that nerdy looking guy...
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*VorpalRaven Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha the one with the glasses? That's Kenji Willows, the Researcher in our group.
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~Lily-Lyn-Rain Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, that one! Then again... I always seem to like the character with glasses...
Ah, interesting. A researcher.
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*VorpalRaven Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's pretty cool. In our game, he had a rough start but later...oh wait, that would be a spoiler XP
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~Lily-Lyn-Rain Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol!
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~Lily-Lyn-Rain Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree with Charlie there... you should do a few pages just to see if you even like doing them.
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*VorpalRaven Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Makes sense. I did enjoy making this one (just drawing the Silph Co. building alone made me smile). The only issue I have is that it's time consuming.
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