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Pokemon GX, Page 1 by VorpalRaven Pokemon GX, Page 1 by VorpalRaven
Okay. Page One attempt. I still don't know if I should keep going.

I would really REALLY appreciate comments on this one. I would like to know if others think this is a project worth pursuing or not.

Remember, no flames or comments about "how much this sucks" or anything like that.

Thank you :)

EDIT:

I had a typo pointed out to me. While I'm happy to fix them, let's not nitpick on this. Especially if it's just one or two words that I accidentally mess up. Right now I just want to know if the drawings in each panel are good enough to keep readers engaged or if the flaws are too distracting. Thank you.
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CaptainBrower Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think this looks really really great and you should definitely keep working on it. Perspective could use some work but overall this is a wonderful start and I'm interested to see the finished product.
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VorpalRaven Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah...perspective has always been the bane of my drawings. Very discouraging at times. I don't know why, but...I guess I just can't see it right in my mind's eye. The latest two pages that I've yet to start editing don't look so good either...

Oh well. Guess all I can really say is bear with me, folks.

In the meantime, thank you for your encouragement.
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Lily-Lyn-Rain Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So far though... I think I like that nerdy looking guy...
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VorpalRaven Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha the one with the glasses? That's Kenji Willows, the Researcher in our group.
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Lily-Lyn-Rain Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, that one! Then again... I always seem to like the character with glasses...
Ah, interesting. A researcher.
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VorpalRaven Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's pretty cool. In our game, he had a rough start but later...oh wait, that would be a spoiler XP
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Lily-Lyn-Rain Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol!
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Lily-Lyn-Rain Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree with Charlie there... you should do a few pages just to see if you even like doing them.
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VorpalRaven Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Makes sense. I did enjoy making this one (just drawing the Silph Co. building alone made me smile). The only issue I have is that it's time consuming.
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Lily-Lyn-Rain Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True. But if you enjoy doing something, no matter how long it takes you, you'll be able to keep working if given the needed time. If you don't enjoy it, you're not going to make it.
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VorpalRaven Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's true...That probably means that this will continue at least for a little while. I hope I can document our entire campaign in this fashion.
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Lily-Lyn-Rain Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sure it would turn out great if you can do it. =)
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VorpalRaven Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
We can hope ^_^
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Lily-Lyn-Rain Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=)
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Charlie200 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hm... I recommend you keep going with this. Its hard to tell how good a story will be by just looking at the first page.
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VorpalRaven Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True enough :)
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4verse8 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Filmographer
Nice concept though I'd appreciate good spelling. *underwater
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VorpalRaven Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW I can't believe I did that. Gonna fix that.
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